Scripts, Scripts, Scripts

Have written 5 scripts (including mine) for the other class members. This has been most enjoyable, especially those that I also created much of the story along with the dialogue etc. I unfortunately made most of them 2-3 pages so need to learn to be more efficient in showing character and story as obviously still need to create to many elements to get accross the intended message. Given these were all done in primarlily one draft though, should be able to tighten them up over time. My own script has been complete for a while, but need to punch up the ending. It is meant to be a little bit of a fizzer anyway, like an epilogue to an episode of said 80's cartoons, so kind of not a real 'joke' but more of a character 'joke' like Calvin and Hobbes etc, but still prob want a bit more punch.