SCRIPT

Have completed 2nd draft of script, this time done in proper layout thanks to Cltex. Still really worried is way too long, as I become even more familiar with the story, maybe I'll find ways of communicating the points in a more efficient manner. Although, knowing me, probably not. At the moment it's about 2 1/2 to 2 2/3 pages long, this however includes the opening credits. Also at least on page is based on one still image or a sequence of still images (drawn to look like vintage comic book panels) so that should reduce the work load.